I’m reviewing House of Twisted Shadows by JH Mann, an extremely atmospheric story set in Cornwall #bookreview #blogtour #historicalmystery

I’m delighted to be reviewing House of Twisted Shadows by JH Mann, an extremely atmospheric story set in Cornwall #bookreview #blogtour

Here’s the blurb

A HOUSE ON THE EDGE
A DAUGHTER DRIVEN TO OBSESSION
A FORBIDDEN LOVE

Winter 1962. Amelia Tremayne has spent the past ten years in London trying to forget the lonely clifftop house where her father was killed. Tyler House was built shortly before the Second World War on Cornwall’s stormy coast by a wealthy German outsider. Its most unsettling feature is a vast glass dome that bends the light, casting twisted, elongated shadows across the walls.

Amelia’s father, Douglas Tremayne, a noted historian, was researching a controversial book about Tyler House’s Nazi origins – and its links to powerful figures in the local community.

As Amelia begins to uncover the truth about her father’s death, she is pulled into a web of buried secrets – and into a forbidden love that could destroy everything she holds dear.

INSPIRED BY A TRUE STORY

Praise for J.H.Mann:

‘Powerful, evocative and steeped in atmosphere – J.H. Mann vividly brings Cornwall’s wild, haunting landscape and its legends to life’ – Margaret James, bestselling author of the Denham Family Sagas

‘Vivid details of the landscape, eroding cliffs and crumbling house…the tension grips you and the atmospheric setting of Tyler House draws you in’ – Cheshire Novel Prize 

Purchase Links

https://www.amazon.co.uk/House-Twisted-Shadows-Wild-Cornwall-ebook/dp/B0H2WRJDTJ/

https://www.amazon.com/House-Twisted-Shadows-Wild-Cornwall-ebook/dp/B0H2WRJDTJ/

My Review

House of Twisted Shadows is an engrossing, claustrophobic historical thriller set in a bitterly cold winter in 1962.

Our main character, Amelia, is driven to finally discover the truth about her father’s murder, ten years earlier, no matter what it takes. Returning to the long-abandoned home, she’s met by firm resistance from all she hopes will aid her in the quest to discover her father’s last manuscript before the house finally crashes onto the coastline below the cliffs. Perhaps it’s mention of the German who built the house, or perhaps it’s the close-knit community who don’t want Amelia to prevail. Perhaps it’s because she immediately seeks out her former lover, now married with a child, and it stirs up resentment. Or perhaps, it’s the house itself, which is oppressive and filled with ghosts of the past, which doesn’t wish to give up its secrets.

This is a real race against time thriller, as the reader certainly knows the house isn’t going to stay standing for much longer as wild winter weather covers the land.

I really enoyed House of Twisted Shadows. It’s a fast-paced read, with some lovely elements to it, as Amelia confronts the ghosts of her past and the ghosts of many others as well.

I’ll be grabbing the rest of the books in this interlinked collection of novels by the author.

Meet the author

J.H.Mann is an award-winning journalist and writer living in the South West of England. His second novel, The Echoing Shore, was a Yeovil Literary Prize award winner and the Adult Fiction Winner of the 2025 Selfies Book Awards at the London Book Fair. His third novel, The Silver Tide, has just been shortlisted for the 2026 Selfies Book Awards. He has strong family links with Cornwall. His novels are inspired by the many stories told by his mother and father and his own experiences as a shore-based volunteer for the Royal National Lifeboat Institution (RNLI). He lives with his wife, Nicola, and their lively whippet Patch.

Author JH Mann

 www.jhmannauthor.com

Introducing Dragonbound, the first book in the Ice and Fire series, a book 18 years in the making #historicalromantasy #authorinspiration

You might well have read romantasy there and wondered what it was all about, but while this is certainly ‘my romance’ story, this book (which you may have read in a previous iteration), like my historical fiction novels, was most certainly inspired by my historical research. Read on…..

The setting for Dragonbound – the first book in the Ice and Fire series

The Ice and Fire series is set in my re-imaginings of an alternative Viking-age Iceland, with dragons (and a few other things going on too). So yes, this is potentially not a ‘normal’ inspiration for fantasy writers, but I’ve always been drawn to fantasy books that heavily rely on a historical setting (and very rarely a true medieval one, (although the PERN novels of Anne McCaffrey do perhaps fall into that category)). 

What drew me to this time and place was the stunning bravery of men and women who decided to risk it all and start afresh in an entirely new ‘land’ to the one they called their home. It’s always been said that Iceland was settled because those living in Norway didn’t wish to fall under the sway of ‘a’ king, and a king they were going to get in the final years of the 800s. While this is somewhat contested now, back then (last century when I first had the idea) this enthralled me. 

Iceland, when it was settled, is said to have been empty apart from one of two religious figures living at the extreme of the known world. Can you imagine being the first to step foot on that landscape? It must have been magical. But that wasn’t the only inspiring element. Those first settlers also undertook a number of endeavours that are unique. They wrote the Landnámabók (the book of Settlements)– a book detailing the land claimed by those settlers, and in that way recorded their history (astonishing). 

The Landnámabók begins, ‘In his book On Times the Venerable Priest Bede mentions an island called Thule, said in other books to lie six days’ sailing to the north of Britain. He says there’s neither daylight there in winter, nor darkness when the day is at its longest in the summer.’ (from the translation by H Pálsson and Paul Edwards.)

Image shows my copy of The Book of Settlements (The Landnamabok).

These settlers also vowed to have no one king and to rule largely through consensus (amazing). And they decided to live in an environment that was harsher than they were used to, even coming from Norway.

And so, I set my characters in an idea of what this might have been, adopting the customs, the ideas, the way they might have lived, but in an entirely fantastical world (unless, of course, there were dragons in Viking age Iceland). I do not profess that everything is accurate (it isn’t), it couldn’t be, but the beautiful, deadly landscape; the bravery of those men and women all inspired me to create the setting for the world of Ice and Fire (and, to be honest, earlier iterations stayed even more true to this setting and landscape, but have been somewhat relaxed to ensure this is a work of fiction). 

Image shows an antique map of Iceland
An antique map of Iceland

Here’s the blurb

The Long Night is ending. The dragon is waking.

Sereh is finally free — but the frozen wilds are just as deadly as the life she left behind. When she saves a mysterious stranger, she binds herself to a fate she doesn’t understand.

Erann has secrets. About the cold. About the land. About why the world is changing.

As the Long Night lingers and something ancient stirs beneath the frozen land, survival means staying together. And their fragile alliance turns into something neither of them can afford.

Because in a world of ice and fire, trust might be the spark that destroys them both.

This slow-burning Norse fantasy romance is perfect for fans of Robin Hobb, T. Kingfisher, S.L. Rowland and Anne McCaffrey.

Releasing 23rd September 2026

Check out the dedicated website for the Ice and Fire Series

Check out the Ice and Fire Series page on the blog

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It’s time… 757, the first book in the brand-new series, The House of Mercia, is now available. Listen to me talking about the new book #fiction #TalesOfMercia

It’s time… 757, the first book in the brand-new series, The House of Mercia, is now available. Listen to me talking about the new book #fiction #TalesOfMercia #fiction #nonfiction #Mercia #MJPorter #HistoricalFiction #SaxonEngland #VikingAge #AngloSaxonHistory #BernardCornwell #LastKingdom #HistFic #ReadingCommunity #BookTok #Vikings

It’s time… 757, the first book in the brand-new series, The House of Mercia, is now available. Listen to me talking about the new book #fiction #TalesOfMercia

I recorded this when 757 was complete

Here’s the blurb for 757

This is Mercia. The year is 757. 
A king will fall. A king will rise. 
But first, civil war will rage.

King Æthelbald’s forty-year vice-like rule over Mercia has been rigid. But he lacks a legitimate heir despite his insatiable bedchamber antics.

Offa must stand hostage to his family’s good behaviour, when his father missteps in removing his mother from Æthelbald’s bed. Shockingly, his younger sister now replaces her.

But the king isn’t finished with his denigration of Offa’s noble House. When his parents are traitorously killed, Offa’s resentment grows, compounded by the ridicule heaped on him by King Æthelbald’s oathsworn warriors.

With the king’s health deteriorating, the matter of the succession becomes paramount. There are plenty who share a claim to the kingship.

Discord threatens to fracture the mighty realm, and those with sword and shield, seax and spear are prepared to risk it all to be the future king of Mercia.

books2read.com/757

Or buy a signed copy direct from me

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I’m welcoming Anthea Laurelton and Fearless Hearts Forbidden Love to the blog #HistoricalRomance #SpartanRomance #HistoricalFantasy #HeartsOfSparta #FearlessHeartsForbiddenLove #BlogTour #TheCoffeePotBookClub

I’m welcoming Anthea Laurelton and Fearless Hearts Forbidden Love to the blog #HistoricalRomance #SpartanRomance #HistoricalFantasy #HeartsOfSparta #FearlessHeartsForbiddenLove #BlogTour #TheCoffeePotBookClub

I’m welcoming Anthea Laurelton and Fearless Hearts Forbidden Love to the blog #HistoricalRomance

Here’s the blurb

To save her city, she must risk her life.

To fulfil his oath, he must harden his heart.

Together, they stand to lose everything.

Spartan warrior, Diokles, has waited years for the opportunity to right a failure that torments his heart and integrity. Sent to hunt down a threat to Sparta, this campaign may be his final chance to restore his honour and uncover the traitor whose actions blighted his life. Success is at his fingertips, but when duty forces him to take an unwilling accomplice, his plans are challenged in ways he never foresaw.

Leandra, high priestess of Apollysis, stands at the edge of revelation and ruin. Haunted by fragments of a forgotten past, she alone can uncover the truth that will save her city. To do so, she must wear the fabled Coronet of Apollo, a sacred act that could cost her life.

Bound together by necessity and desire, captor and captive race into danger the closer they draw to the shrine of Apollo. With a relentless enemy closing in, one who seeks Diokles dead and Leandra for himself, their growing passion becomes both their greatest strength and their most perilous weakness.

In a time where prophecy, honour, and blood rule, love was never part of the plan.

An epic historical adventure romance of bravery, betrayal, and forbidden desire.

Fully edited, revised version of ‘SpartanQuest – Salvation’ with extra scenes.

Triggers: Love scenes on the page – Romance heat level 3. Some battle scenes.

Buy Link

http://www.books2read.com/HeartsofSparta-1

Meet the author

Anthea Laurelton writes sweeping romances inspired by Ancient Sparta and Greek mythology. Her stories combine historical elements, forbidden love, dangerous quests and emotionally complex heroines for readers of mythological and historical fantasy.

A fan of sword and sandal movies, her plots blend slow-burn romance, dangerous quests, warrior culture and family intrigue for readers who crave epic adventures. Falling in love with Greek mythology at the age of thirteen, her love of the Spartans especially, came after reading Roger Lancelyn Green’s THE TALE OF TROY where she cheered on Menelaus to take his queen back!

She left a career in IT to pursue her passion for storytelling and pander to an extremely spoilt German Shepherd whom she refers to as ‘The Muse’. 

A former equestrian, Anthea enjoys keeping active and has a bucket list of travel destinations waiting to be fulfilled.

Author Anthea Laurelton

 www.anthealaurelton.com

Follow the Fearless Hearts Forbidden Love by Anthea Laurelton blog tour with The Coffee Pot Book Club

I’m welcoming G.G. MacLeod to the blog with VIA MALORUM #AncientRome #Agrippina #Messalina #DarkRomantasy #PsychThriller #Giallo #BlogTour #ReaderReach #TheCoffeePotBookClub #YardeBookPromotions

I’m welcoming G.G. MacLeod to the blog with VIA MALORUM #AncientRome #Agrippina #Messalina #DarkRomantasy #PsychThriller #Giallo #BlogTour #ReaderReach #TheCoffeePotBookClub #YardeBookPromotions @GGMacLeod1 @cathiedunn @maryanneyarde @ggmacleod1 @thecoffeepotbookclub @yardereviews

I’m welcoming G.G. MacLeod to the blog with VIA MALORUM #AncientRome #Agrippina #Messalina #DarkRomantasy #PsychThriller #Giallo #BlogTour #ReaderReach #TheCoffeePotBookClub #YardeBookPromotions

Here’s the blurb

In the shadows of Rome power bleeds red.

In the shadowed streets of ancient Rome, 37 CE, power is a blade that cuts both ways. Agrippina, a towering enigma of ambition, slips from Caligula’s gilded cage with her newborn son, Domitius, her mind a labyrinth of cold calculation. At her side prowls Messalina, a siren in scarlet, her seductive cunning as deadly as her blade. Together, they navigate a city teeming with decadence and deceit, pursued by whispers of treachery and the emperor’s wrath.

Their journey leads to the Temple of Fortuna where the enigmatic Prophet Cassandra unveils a cryptic fate – one that demands sacrifice and promises blood. As alleys echo with violence and forbidden passions ignite, Agrippina’s quest for dominion collides with Messalina’s ruthless desires. In a night where every step drips with danger, who will rise and who will fall?

VIA MALORUM is a visceral plunge into the heart of Roman darkness, blending historical intrigue with the chilling allure of giallo. Prepare for a tale where power bleeds red, and trust is a luxury none can afford.

Any Triggers: Some rough lesbian sex, moderate violence.

https://books2read.com/u/bMkq6a

Meet the author

The author is a 59-year-old Canadian male based in Calgary. The author has always had a tendency of combining genres like horror and action along with drama, psychological thrillers, giallo, and sometimes even comedy. 

It really depends on how the author feels from moment to moment as they write because the author likes to entertain themselves first and then hope that a smattering of other people out there in the world will like it as well.

Author GG Macleod
Follow the Via Malorum by GG MacLeod blog tour with The Coffee Pot Book Club

757, the first book in the brand-new series, The House of Mercia. Listen to me talking about the new book #fiction #TalesOfMercia

It’s nearly time… 757, the first book in the brand new series, The House of Mercia, will be with readers in July 2026. Listen to me talking about the new book #fiction #TalesOfMercia #fiction #nonfiction #Mercia #MJPorter #HistoricalFiction #SaxonEngland #VikingAge #AngloSaxonHistory #BernardCornwell #LastKingdom #HistFic #ReadingCommunity #BookTok #Vikings

I recorded this after completing the strutural edits for 757

Here’s the blurb for 757

This is Mercia. The year is 757. 
A king will fall. A king will rise. 
But first, civil war will rage.

King Æthelbald’s forty-year vice-like rule over Mercia has been rigid. But he lacks a legitimate heir despite his insatiable bedchamber antics.

Offa must stand hostage to his family’s good behaviour, when his father missteps in removing his mother from Æthelbald’s bed. Shockingly, his younger sister now replaces her.

But the king isn’t finished with his denigration of Offa’s noble House. When his parents are traitorously killed, Offa’s resentment grows, compounded by the ridicule heaped on him by King Æthelbald’s oathsworn warriors.

With the king’s health deteriorating, the matter of the succession becomes paramount. There are plenty who share a claim to the kingship.

Discord threatens to fracture the mighty realm, and those with sword and shield, seax and spear are prepared to risk it all to be the future king of Mercia.

books2read.com/757

Or buy a signed copy direct from me

Join my Boldwood newsletter to receive a free prequel short story, written exclusively for the the release of The House of Mercia series. https://BookHip.com/MKSKVRX

757, the first book in the brand new series, The House of Mercia. Here are some photos from my visit to Repton’s Saxon crypt #fiction #TalesOfMercia

Introducing 757, the first book in the brand new series, The House of Mercia #fiction #nonfiction #Mercia #MJPorter #HistoricalFiction #SaxonEngland #VikingAge #AngloSaxonHistory #BernardCornwell #LastKingdom #HistFic #ReadingCommunity #BookTok #Vikings

Here’s the blurb for 757

This is Mercia. The year is 757. 
A king will fall. A king will rise. 
But first, civil war will rage.

King Æthelbald’s forty-year vice-like rule over Mercia has been rigid. But he lacks a legitimate heir despite his insatiable bedchamber antics.

Offa must stand hostage to his family’s good behaviour, when his father missteps in removing his mother from Æthelbald’s bed. Shockingly, his younger sister now replaces her.

But the king isn’t finished with his denigration of Offa’s noble House. When his parents are traitorously killed, Offa’s resentment grows, compounded by the ridicule heaped on him by King Æthelbald’s oathsworn warriors.

With the king’s health deteriorating, the matter of the succession becomes paramount. There are plenty who share a claim to the kingship.

Discord threatens to fracture the mighty realm, and those with sword and shield, seax and spear are prepared to risk it all to be the future king of Mercia.

books2read.com/757

Or buy a signed copy direct from me

Join my Boldwood newsletter to receive a free prequel short story, written exclusively for the the release of The House of Mercia series. https://BookHip.com/MKSKVRX

Book Review. Helen Golden’s A Blighter is Bumped Off-#bookreview #historicalmystery #blogtour #avidreader

I’m delighted to welcome a returning Helen Golden to the blog with her new book, A Blighter is Bumped Off-#bookreview #historicalmystery #blogtour #avidreader @rararesources

Here’s the blurb

The only thing worse than a persistent suitor? A dead one on your lawn.

London, 1892. Alice, Duchess of Stortford, has returned to town determined to enjoy her first Season as a wealthy widow. But instead of balls, flirtation, and whispered gossip, she finds herself besieged by ambitious bachelors—none more persistent than the insufferably smooth-talking Miles Fonthill. When Alice firmly refuses his sudden proposal, she assumes the matter is settled.

Instead, he turns up dead in her garden.

The police are happy to call it a tragic accident. Alice is less convinced.

Why was Miles climbing over her garden wall in the middle of the night? Why had he become so determined to win her favour? And what did he really want?

As Alice begins to dig into Miles’ final days, her search leads her into the glittering heart of London society, where old loyalties run deep, secrets are guarded fiercely, and reputation matters more than truth. But when whispers of the mysterious Order of the Golden Key begin circling dangerously close to her own late husband’s name, Alice realises this death may be far more complicated than one unwelcome suitor meeting an unfortunate end.

And if someone is willing to kill to keep their secrets…this Season may prove positively deadly.

Perfect for fans of feisty female sleuths, Victorian High Society, and secret scandals, all served with a dash of humour and a cup of tea.

Purchase Link

https://www.amazon.co.uk/Blighter-Bumped-Duchess-Stortford-Mystery-ebook/dp/B0FWC6CBLC

https://www.amazon.com/Blighter-Bumped-Duchess-Stortford-Mystery-ebook/dp/B0FWC6CBLC

My Review

A Blighter is Bumped Off is the third full-length novel in the Duchess of Stortford cosy historical mystery series. I’ve read them all.

It’s good to be back with Lady Alice, and this time she has a right old pickle on her hands. Her reputation is at stake, and ladies of the Ton do not like having their reputation imperilled.

With the aid of her trusty allies, Lady Alice determines to get to the bottom of the puzzling mystery of how the body of her ex-suitor came to be found in her garden and very enjoyable it is too. She uncovers some delightfully dodgy dealings as she hunts down the truth with the aid of her trusty servants, and te aid of her PI and none other than Sherlock Holmes.

Another fun, historical story with a good dash of cosy, and just the sort of mystery I like to read.

Check out my reviews for the books in Helen Golden’s Right Royal Mystery series, featuring one of Lady Alice’s descendants.

Spruced Up For Murder

For Richer, For Deader

Not Mushroom For Death

A Dead Herring

A Cocktail to Die For

A Death of Fresh Air

I Kill Always Love You

A Murder Most Wilde

And my review for the prequel in the new historical mystery series, as well as the full-length novels.

An Heir is Misplaced

A Husband is Hushed Up

A Dowager is Done-In

Meet the author

Helen Golden spins mysteries that are charmingly British, delightfully deadly, and served with a twist of humour.

With quirky characters, clever red herrings, and plots that keep the pages turning, she’s the author of the much-loved A Right Royal Cozy Investigation series, following Lady Beatrice and her friends—including one clever little dog—as they uncover secrets hidden in country houses and royal palaces. Her new historical mystery series, The Duchess of Stortford Mysteries, is set in Victorian England and introduces an equally curious sleuth from Lady Beatrice’s own family tree—where murders are solved over cups of tea, whispered gossip, and overheard conversations in drawing rooms and grand estates.

Helen lives in a quintessential English village in Lincolnshire with her husband, stepdaughter, and a menagerie of pets—including a dog, several cats, a tortoise, and far too many fish.

If you love clever puzzles, charming settings, and sleuths with spark, her books are waiting for you.

Author image for Helen Golden

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I’m welcoming the Wordsmith’s Guide to Writing Authentic Dialogue by Elizabeth M Hurst to the blog #blogtour #nonfiction #writingadvice

I’m welcoming the Wordsmith’s Guide to Writing Authentic Dialogue by Elizabeth M Hurst to the blog #blogtour #nonfiction #writingadvice

I’m welcoming the Wordsmith’s Guide to Writing Authentic Dialogue by Elizabeth M Hurst to the blog #blogtour #nonfiction #writingadvice

Why I Wrote A Wordsmith’s Guide to Writing Authentic Dialogue

I’ve been asked a few times why I chose to write A Wordsmith’s Guide to Writing Authentic Dialogue. The succinct answer is this: I asked my readers what they wanted me to cover next, and they told me they wanted something about character dialogue.

That made immediate sense to me. Dialogue is one of those areas of writing that looks deceptively simple. After all, we all talk. We all listen to conversations. We all know what speech sounds like – or at least we think we do. But putting convincing dialogue on the page is a very different skill from reproducing everyday speech exactly as it happens.

In real life, conversations are messy, repetitive, unfinished, and full of filler. People interrupt themselves, lose their train of thought, circle back, contradict themselves, and say “um” or “you know” far more often than any reader would willingly tolerate in a novel. If we wrote dialogue exactly as people speak, it would be tedious. Fictional dialogue has to have a purpose: it has to sound real while still being readable.

That is one of the reasons dialogue can be so challenging for writers. It has to feel natural, but also has to earn its place in the story. A good exchange between characters might reveal personality, create tension, deepen a relationship, move the plot forward, suggest conflict, or show us something the character does not want to admit. Often, the best dialogue does several of these at once.

I also think dialogue matters because it is one of the quickest ways readers decide whether they believe in a character. Description can tell us what someone looks like. Action can show us what they do. But dialogue lets us hear them. It gives us rhythm, attitude, hesitation, confidence, defensiveness, humour, fear, tenderness, and all the other subtle signals that make a fictional person feel alive.

One of the most useful lessons I’ve learned, both as a writer and an editor, is that dialogue is rarely only about the words being spoken. It is also about what is not said. People dodge difficult subjects. They hide behind jokes. They answer a different question from the one they were asked. They say “I’m fine” when they are anything but fine. That gap between what is said and what is meant is where the emotional energy of a scene lives and breathes.

Character voice is another important part of the puzzle. When every character speaks in the same rhythm, with the same vocabulary and the same level of confidence, the reader may struggle to tell them apart. But distinctive dialogue does not have to mean exaggerated slang, heavy dialect, or a string of catchphrases. It can be much more subtle than that. One character may speak in short, guarded sentences. Another may over-explain. One may use humour to deflect. Another may become very formal when upset. These choices tell us who people are, especially when they are under pressure.

That is why I wanted this book to be practical. Dialogue is not just decoration. It is one of the main ways writers create character, conflict, and connection. When it works well, readers believe in the people on the page.

And perhaps that is the real goal of authentic dialogue. Not to copy real speech word for word, but to create the illusion of it. To make readers feel that these characters existed before the scene began and will continue existing after it ends. To make every line sound as though it could only have been spoken by that person, in that moment, for that reason.

So when my readers asked for a guide to dialogue, I understood why. It is a subject that touches almost every part of storytelling. Whether you are writing a quiet emotional exchange, a heated argument, a romantic confession, a comic misunderstanding, or a scene full of things left unsaid, dialogue can transform the way readers experience your characters.

Used well, dialogue does not simply fill the silence. It brings the story to life.

Here’s the blurb

A Wordsmith’s Guide to Writing Authentic Dialogue

Do you lack confidence when writing dialogue for your fictional characters?
Do you want to learn how to make each person have a distinctive voice?


Real conversations wander. Fictional dialogue can’t afford to.

A Wordsmith’s Guide to Writing Authentic Dialogue is a practical, encouraging craft book for fiction writers who want dialogue that does more than fill the page. You’ll learn how to make every exchange purposeful, character-specific, and charged with subtext—without gimmicks, melodrama, or the dreaded “As you know…” exposition.


You will learn how to:

  • build distinct voices through rhythm, worldview, and verbal habits (not quirky spelling);
  • show status and power through questions, interruptions, silence, and topic control;
  • handle tags, beats, and action cleanly so dialogue moves instead of clogs;
  • write conflict that escalates and changes shape (without repeating itself);
  • approach trauma, consent, and emotionally heavy scenes without voyeurism or melodrama.


You’ll also find:

  • short, generic examples you can learn from immediately;
  • focused exercises you can complete in 10–20 minutes;
  • diagnose-and-rewrite case studies (where relevant);
  • checklists: quick bullet points to use while drafting and revising.

If your characters explain too much, sound the same, circle the point, or talk in a void—this guide will give you clear tools to diagnose the problem and rewrite with confidence.

Have the confidence to write dialogue that reflects the best of your characters, and the best of your writing. Pick up your copy today.

Purchase Link

 https://geni.us/AuthenticDialogue

Meet the author

Elizabeth was born and bred in the picturesque harbour town of Whitehaven in the northwest of England, where the long, wet winters moulded her into a voracious reader of fiction to escape the dismal weather.

In 2016, Elizabeth set up her freelance editing and proofreading business, EMH Editorial Services. In 2018, she quit the corporate world and concentrated her energy full-time towards her love of the written word.

Elizabeth has published timeslip novellas (the Lost Souls series) and a stand-alone novel, A Light Shines in Darkness, based on Blessed Angelina of Marsciano. She is also the author of The Wordsmith’s Guides, a series of nonfiction books on the craft of writing.

Elizabeth now lives with her husband in the warm and sunny south of France, where the wine is cheaper than the water, and the cats spend their days hunting lizards and dreaming of the birds that roost on the roof.

Author Elizabeth M hurst

Connect with the author

https://elizabethhurstauthor.com/

I’m welcoming Andrea Goyan and her new book, The Catalyst, to the blog, with an inspiring post for all those writers out there #blogtour #scifi #writersadvice

I’m welcoming Andrea Goyan and her new book, The Catalyst, to the blog, with an inspiring post for all those writers out there #blogtour #scifi #writersadvice

I’m welcoming Andrea Goyan and her new book, The Catalyst, to the blog, with an inspiring post for all those writers out there #blogtour #scifi #writersadvice

Thank you for inviting me to write a guest blog. I’m delighted to be here with you and your readers. 

My post today directly relates to writers, but I think anyone who navigates risks, rejections, or affirmations will relate on some level because I we all face similar angels and demons. 

“Thank You for Sharing Your Work with Us. Unfortunately…”  

—Random Editor

Ouch. These or similar words of rejection litter every writer’s email inbox. If you’re submitting work, receiving lots of them is part of the deal.  

I want to recognize that sending stories (or anything) out into the world is an act of courage. Opening ourselves up for criticism or rejection risks bruising souls and fragile egos. It is not easy. But the need to be seen and heard—read—keeps most of us in the game.

“Thank You for Sharing Your Work with Us. We’d be delighted to publish…” 

—Favorite Random Editor

 Yes! These are the emails we live for. But as fabulous as those acceptances, encouragement, and love are, those joyful feelings are fleeting. Fairy dust that blows away with the first breeze. The need for more, more, more feels akin to an addiction. 

“Can you help us out?”

—Magazine Editor 

When I started submitting short stories to small markets seriously, I was thrilled that the online process was loads easier than the old-fashioned, snail-mail way. Faster, easier, less wasteful, but as nerve-wracking as ever. And rejections…ugh. Each one stung like a blade slipped between my ribs, touching my heart. I commiserated with other fiction writers, weeping onto my keyboard. Wondered why or if I should continue. The game seemed impossible. But I did continue, and a funny thing happened. I met a ton of other writers, and my writing community grew. 

I watched how other writers managed their submissions, and found that the more I submitted, the less precious any one submission became, and its rejection hurt less when I had other pieces out for consideration. Every successful writer I know submits all the time. They look like they’re accepted and published by everyone, but they still get tons of rejections. It’s a numbers game. The more pieces out, the more potential, the more noes, and the more yeses. 

More visibility led editors to ask for my help. I accepted, and I learned some surprising things along the way. Some of my most valuable insights came from being a slush reader for a magazine and serving as a judge for a few contests. The positions were different, but the similarities showed me how random a lot of editorial decisions are. They aren’t only about if the story is good, tons of great stories are rejected—I’ve rejected some. There are ineffable lists of criteria beyond any writer’s control. I found a lot of peace in that knowledge, and it made the rejections less personal—of course, they’d never been personal. They simply felt that way.

 “Your work is more important than how you feel about it.” 

—Claudette Sutherland, Mentor

She’s retired now, but those words were like a mantra for Claudette. Her students oohed and ahhed whenever she said them, while I secretly wondered what the hell she meant. What I felt mattered to me and still does. It took me years to understand she wasn’t attacking my feelings. I believe she wanted us to get out of our own way. Stop whining about all the reasons we didn’t do and just do. Stop editing our work and push forward. Tell our egos to take a back seat for a while and set our creativity free. 

“I can do this.”

—Me, circa 2025-26

This past year, while I’ve been continually working on The Catalyst, I’ve been too busy to worry about rejections. Too busy to send out many submissions either. The novel’s deadlines were fast and unrelenting, and they forced me to move. To do. Always stepping forward and outside of my comfort zone. 

I met the challenges and learned that what really matters, what really heals my bruised ego and feeds my soul, is the work itself. Not how other people receive it. It’s the act of creating, the spark, the fire that burns until it’s consumed at its source, leading to words on the page. Creating the thing, whatever that thing is. That’s the only thing I can hold onto and call my own. What anyone else feels about it belongs to them. 

Thank you for sharing such a fab post:) And yes, rejection is part of the game, but the act of creating, and the joy it brings, is why we keep on keeping on!

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Meet the author

Andrea Goyan is an award-winning author and an avid animal person who grew up being called Goat-Girl and Raccoon-Mama. She is a grateful part of a flock of collaborative Magpie Poets whose first collection, An Illegal Feast, was released in 2025. Andrea also co-hosts MetaStellar Magazine’s “Long-Lost Friends” and “Storytime.” In her spare time, she walks her dogs and loves to paint, especially animal portraits. 

Many of her stories are available for free on her website.

Author Andrea Goyan